Over-writing / "Purple Prose": It relies heavily on forced vocabulary ("humble abode," "unrivaled caution," "melancholic beauty") rather than natural storytelling. Telling instead of Showing: Phrases like "excruciatingly long journey" state how long it was instead of letting the scene's pacing demonstrate it. 👨🎓 Facilitator Bryan | 23+ yrs | Your English Exam Writing Specialist ❌... Continue Reading →
