- Over-writing / “Purple Prose”: It relies heavily on forced vocabulary (“humble abode,” “unrivaled caution,” “melancholic beauty”) rather than natural storytelling.
- Telling instead of Showing: Phrases like “excruciatingly long journey” state how long it was instead of letting the scene’s pacing demonstrate it.
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